I can't write today
Things telling me to go, but I have to stay
Maybe things are better this way
Things left unsaid, but everything's said someday
Time has no meaning, no rhyme anyway
Everything oneday, will be okay
I don't like to repeat what I say
But maybe things are better this way..
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Next poem-mabober ('cause I'm cool like that, and one wouldn't suffice)
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Unresolved issues will remain
You say it's just not the right time frame
Whats on my mind doesn't count for shit
When you start to go into this mood that you get
My mind's a blur, it's messed up
But I'm not something like a half filled cup
I'll say what I say when I want to say it
even if it doesn't fit
Your timeframe, and your rouse,
Just a dish of the rebel's blues
4 comments:
Ooh, I feel'ye dowg
D: Who here was asked to comment? Hmm? HMM? O_o XD But seriously, the poems are pretty good, although the first one uses the same ryhme scheme and makes it a be repedetive. D:
repetitive* There you happy now? corrected. D:
Ok, wtf is going on? I was thinking that blogger was getting cool, but now we have these wierdos that are trying to make cash by commenting on other people's blogs and sucking traffic into their own, and now I have to add a letter thing to prove I'm not a bot? WTF?
I really liked the poems, especially the first one. And who was giving you crap about writing ;-p?
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